Ripples of bubbly water stream behind the boat leaving faded boat prints left for the next group to find their way. The fierce hands of the children hold onto the silver rails like a scene on Titanic. Salt water flicks up into our faces as the boat dodges round sea hazards. It was like boat dodge ball but in a gentle kind of way. Sweat drips down our faces like spitting water. Our hearts pound against our chests like the mallet of the judges orders. Overall we had an awesome time especially bonding with classmates and enjoying the scenery.
A well constructive and descriptive piece of writing Lei. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing I really liked how you described your surroundings.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you described the water, and I could really feel how you felt.
ReplyDeleteAMAZING WORK
A fantastic piece of writing Lei especially the faded boat prints. Mrs Hutchins
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