The St Mary's Magic’s fought with exhaustion in basketball. Our bodies sweat with a pumping heart as we we're trying to win. My legs slowed down like a car without enough petrol and my body was running out of energy. The whistle was about to be blown, I bounced the ball repeatedly till I was nearby the goal. The ball flew high like a bird. It bounced several times on the rim. Luckily it got in. I was really proud of myself. But sadly we lost 5 to 7. My breath slowly faded into a whisper being surprised about the score.
Wednesday, 22 October 2014
Liams writing buddy
I have been working with my buddy Liam, he is 6 and a half. This descriptive piece is describing his feelings through out the game.
The St Mary's Magic’s fought with exhaustion in basketball. Our bodies sweat with a pumping heart as we we're trying to win. My legs slowed down like a car without enough petrol and my body was running out of energy. The whistle was about to be blown, I bounced the ball repeatedly till I was nearby the goal. The ball flew high like a bird. It bounced several times on the rim. Luckily it got in. I was really proud of myself. But sadly we lost 5 to 7. My breath slowly faded into a whisper being surprised about the score.
The St Mary's Magic’s fought with exhaustion in basketball. Our bodies sweat with a pumping heart as we we're trying to win. My legs slowed down like a car without enough petrol and my body was running out of energy. The whistle was about to be blown, I bounced the ball repeatedly till I was nearby the goal. The ball flew high like a bird. It bounced several times on the rim. Luckily it got in. I was really proud of myself. But sadly we lost 5 to 7. My breath slowly faded into a whisper being surprised about the score.
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